ext_79315 ([identity profile] redheadaholic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bluflamingo 2009-01-27 08:37 pm (UTC)

Wow, this is really gorgeous and moving.

What if they really did only work because they were stuck in Iraq with each other? What if this is a huge mistake...

I second the call for the backstory of how they got from not being together in Iraq to deciding to be together now, particularly given your description of their struggle with verbal communication at this point.

Brad gives him a slow once-over and a smile. “Not that I’ve noticed. I’d do a more thorough investigation of the question, but this parking lot is somewhat lacking in natural cover, and we wouldn’t want to shock the natives.”

Whew! That Brad sure can say a lot with a look and a smile, can't he?

Well done.

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